Mckenzie, I just wanted to let you know that these images are great. Visually striking as well as cohesive in concept. In saying this the two with the face might be problematic. They all work together right now but it is something to consider. Through out your images there is an identity made by the hands. There seems to be a conscious decision in your framing to crop out the face. I mean all is well and the series is great but those considerations might make the book that much more solid. Good work. -Ivan
Mckenzie,
ReplyDeleteI just wanted to let you know that these images are great. Visually striking as well as cohesive in concept. In saying this the two with the face might be problematic. They all work together right now but it is something to consider. Through out your images there is an identity made by the hands. There seems to be a conscious decision in your framing to crop out the face. I mean all is well and the series is great but those considerations might make the book that much more solid.
Good work.
-Ivan